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Saturday, 23 February 2008

come love

come love..
come love lets do something..

lets pour some fire on gasoline
electricity on water
put some colour in the keliedoscope
some dreams in the sleep

come love..
come love lets do something..

lets make tranquil shrieks
pastures in creeks
hold with hands open,
release with clenched fist

come love..
come love lets do something..

6 comments:

Sushmita said...

I didn't know that you write poetry!

Anonymous said...

neither did i..!!

:)

June Nandy Chaudhuri said...

Heeeyyyyyyyyy VIVEK!!!

Is that you???? Hmmm So Punjaaabi!You do look goood.Beside you Gauri als o looks very Pretty.You make a cosy and a beautiful couple. I'm so happy for you both.

Seems Gauri is makeing her presence felt. The new Blog screen, speaks volume.

This poem is absolutely fabulous but from ehrn did the gasoline and petrol and electricity and kettle became the ingredients of Love??

Anyways, the thought behind it is very touching.After ages, I've liked staying here in your blog for quite some time.

Keep up the good work and here's wishing you a rosy future for you booth.

June Nandy Chaudhuri said...

Heeeyyyyyyyyy VIVEK!!!

Is that you???? Hmmm So Punjaaabi!You do look goood.Beside you Gauri als o looks very Pretty.You make a cosy and a beautiful couple. I'm so happy for you both.

Seems Gauri is makeing her presence felt. The new Blog screen, speaks volume.

This poem is absolutely fabulous but from ehrn did the gasoline and petrol and electricity and kettle became the ingredients of Love??

Anyways, the thought behind it is very touching.After ages, I've liked staying here in your blog for quite some time.

Keep up the good work and here's wishing you a rosy future for you booth.

viv said...

thankyou June.. I am glad u liked the new look..

yeah.. I guess i am enjoying myself..

Fire gasoline and stuff.. umm.. well thats how brutes write poetry i guess.. :)

Nice that u wrote..

COOLDEEPTEA said...

:)